CRITICAL SELF-REFLECTION

CRITICAL SELF-REFLECTION

1. In this draft, I am proud and confident of the following;

• Arrangement of ideas. I believe that I have arranged my ideas systematically and avoided repetition.
• Detailed work. My thesis is well detailed, and ideas are properly analyzed.

2. The following areas need improvement;

• Clarity of ideas. Some ideas in the thesis are developed slowly and require extensive support.
• The work is properly organized overall, but the recommended solution, recommendation, and justification part might need a better organization.

3. I had questions about the thesis statement; is it independent of the Thesis model? If so, should it be similar to the thesis statement in the Executive Summary?
4. My thesis statement is strong and supported throughout the entire essay, as it covers ways to enhance inter-departmental communication to improve customer care.
5. My Rhetorical structure is arranged well as it follows the instructions provided. It also avoids the mixing of ideas.
6. Each of my paragraphs contains one main point that is well developed because I’ve managed to incorporate one idea in one paragraph in most areas of the essay.
7. Each of my body paragraphs contained a topic sentence that covers what is discussed in the paragraph.
8. Almost all of my sentences are grammatically correct, as I have gone through the essay thoroughly and checked spelling errors.
9. I had questions about the thesis statement; is it independent of the Thesis model? If so, should it be similar to the thesis statement in the Executive Summary?
10. My thesis statement is strong and supported throughout the entire essay, as it covers ways to enhance inter-departmental communication to improve customer care.
11. My Rhetorical structure is arranged well as it follows the instructions provided. It also avoids the mixing of ideas.
12. Each of my paragraphs contains one main point that is well developed because I’ve managed to incorporate one idea in one paragraph in most areas of the essay.
13. Each of my body paragraphs contained a topic sentence that covers what is discussed in the paragraph.
14. Almost all of my sentences are grammatically correct, as I have gone through the essay thoroughly and checked spelling errors.