Ineffective-based on healing rate, inability to keep diabetic wounds moist (saline-moistened gauzes)
Gaps-
Previous interventions:
- Ineffective-based on healing rate, inability to keep diabetic wounds moist (saline-moistened gauzes)
- Lack of sufficient scientific evidence to support their efficacy
- Costly thus burdening patients and the healthcare system
These are explained within the write up supported with studies and cited. I think they sufficiently explained the gaps that NPWT aims to fill. Kindly review the write and let me know.
Regarding Key Word
Kindly clarify, I do not understand when you say I should expand on the ‘key words.’ I think key words here, which are diabetes, NPWT, etc. are supposed to help in searching for the sources and information so that we only narrow down to what is related to the study question.
Lastly, I think I was to address what you said was missing and listed explicitly under ‘What I lack at my assessment 1 is-‘. There are aspects of the revision that were not in the list of what you wanted to be addressed.