Narrative revision

Narrative revision

Adjacent to the tall city wall of Mora, there is an isolated nest sewed with care and appears to be extraordinary in the sense that rain and strong winds do not interfere with its position or stricture. In its separate location, there lives a bird that every day, seems to mind no one’s business due to the belief that the community placed it. Pinora could fly above the tallest buildings all a lot every day throughout the year with nobody to associate. And, this became its normal life but always thought of something better in the future.

Mora is a city that is surrounded by a 40 feet perimeter wall with tall buildings; many animals that engage in different activities to ensure the growth and maintenance of the town. Within this town, the population was increasing rapidly, and this brought worries to the community in general. However, finding a solution for the situation was difficult as every individual was locked within the walls due to some historical narrations connected to beyond the wall. That is, back in the days, the walls of Mora was about four feet tall, and this made animals to cross to the other part beyond the city easily. So, animals were free to move in, and out, but there came a time when a lightning stroke the lands outside the walls that started a wildfire. Animals outside the walls were burnt top ashes. However, through that period, black animals were never allowed to move freely outside the city. They lived within the walls for all the years. However, on this day, some of the black animals escaped with other animals since they wanted to experience nature outside the ‘cage.’ Unfortunately, this is the day that the calamity occurred. Since then, the wall was erected up to 40 feet tall and strict rules were formulated and implemented on the inhabitants of the city.  Since then, the black-feathered birds and other black animals were despised and accounted for the bad omen. From then, this race was neglected, and the strict rules of staying within the walls were not subjected to them. They were allowed to move out with the notion that they would not make it from the dangers beyond the wall. Through time, these black races moved beyond the walls, but none ever came back. Despite this, the remaining could perceive that the life within the walls is a long term burning in hell and dying instantly beyond the walls could be better. Therefore, they found their ways out day by day until the city was free of black generation.  When it was confirmed that they were over, the gate was locked, and the city remained with white inhabitants. But one thing they did not know is the reason for not coming back, whereby they only thought of death beyond the walls. Since then, they lived for generations without calamity, but the population increased rapidly.

One day after several generations, some birds from the lands outside the walls were flying nearby, and a strong wind started blowing. This was common as the region could experience heavy rainfalls. There was a young bird that was flying together with the mother but unfortunately, the wind blew it into the walls. The sky and the air was filled with dust carried by the wind that the mother did not see where it had gone. So the mother went back alone. With the dislocated wings, it could not fly above the wall to get back home. It stayed next to the wall for days, but it got hungry and started looking for food. This became a problem an entire community despised it for the colour.

Furthermore, it was like a bad omen to the city. With isolation, there was a lot to be done for survival. The problematic situation taught the bird how to survive. The first task was to fix the broken wings, and this was done by constant attempts of flying and falling. Consequently, this continued, and it happened that through this process, it developed strong wings.  Pinora grew intelligently, and with the increasing population, is believed to be the solution despite being despised basing on race. When Pinora was spotted within the city, the gate that been closed for years was opened for it to move out so that the entrance to be closed once again. When the bird learnt of this, and with the ability to fly great heights, it flew over the wall at night while the security guards at the gate were on the watch out waiting for the strange bird to move out so that the gate could be closed again. Pinora knew that if it left through the gate, it would be closed accessing the city might be more difficult. Therefore, going through lands Pinora traced its home after a long wander in the jungle, evidence of civilization appeared from a far distance. On approaching, there were numerous animals of different races living together in harmony seemed to be happy. The primary reason why the blackbird travelled this distance is to help the city that despised it. Therefore, it engaged in conversation with the residents of the new lands.

The lands in the hill received a lot of rain, and the grounds are very fertile. Also, people there are hardworking and yield a lot of farm produces that some are kept for future use. As a result, they managed to save more than enough that there were no other places to stay the surplus. So Pinora requested them to extend support to the city that is going through challenges connected to a shortage of food and diseases brought by malnutrition. Therefore, the animal elders from the hills agreed to help the city, but the problem was how to access the lands. But Pinora told them that the gate that had been closed for years was opened and could be closed only when they confirmed that it had gone. So they carried some of the farm produces and went to the city. They knew that by taking this step, they could find support in terms of machines that could help through agriculture. Therefore, this could result in a trade between the two regions. The first group that was sent involved white animals, since they understood how the blacks were despised. Through the negotiation, they visitors explained how they came to exist, that is from the narration of their generations, that there was a calamity that killed many of the white ages that moved out of the Mora on the day of the catastrophe. However, some of the blacks also escaped and managed to run out, and it was believed that every animal had died. But, some who escaped survived. They came together to start a new life. After that, other black animals joined later from the city, and they never went back.  That is when the members of the town learnt the reason why the blacks who went out never came back. They found a better life outside. After a short while, Pinora arrived at the city, and upon seeing seen, the guards were suppressed that the bird was not within the walls. Then Pinora explained what it how everything happened together with the plan. In turn, this resulted in a successful negotiation that brought unity among all the races. The blackbird was considered as the most important animal in the two kingdoms and was selected as the leader of all other animals, and everyone was happy with the decision.

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