effects of tacking football
The writer in the first paragraph tries to bring out the effects of tacking football. He explains how he feels went the Kamikaze player comes in. the player poses characteristics that according to him it is not normal. Introduction descriptions of what happens in tackle football.
I find the introduction being effective as it tries to portrays the extraordinary things that happen in football. ( Bridgwater,2018) These things include anger, desperation, and hatred which might result in some brain disease. The main punts the writer tries to bring about is the brain disease which is associated which tackle football. The disease presents at mid-twenties which is characterized by the nerve fibers being damaged. Teens and children are at high risk of concussions.
In the third paragraph, the background information the writer brings about is the issue of human anatomy. He describes that human anatomy lacks woodpeekers which protect the brain from colliding with the skull hence human anatomy is not created for football. As human anatomy lacks the protective structure to protect the brain the man is prone to diseases such as Alzheimer’s, Parkinson’s, and amyotrophic lateral sclerosis.
In the last paragraph the writer realization of loving football and the side effects of it, makes him concludes not allowing his generation to participate in tackle football. Each body paragraph is effective as the writer main point is presented, for example, the brain disease the writer talks about it, he explains the group at risk, the cause and even how the cause comes about using the human anatomy explanation.
Reference:
Gómez, N., Banks, S. W., Nowakowski, D. J., Rosas, J. G., Cara, J., Sánchez, M. E., & Bridgwater, A. V. (2018). Effect of temperature on product performance of high ash biomass during fast pyrolysis and its bio-oil storage evaluation. Fuel Processing Technology, 172, 97-105.